Tuesday, April 16, 2013

Litter


Not many places in the world would you see a group of people walk over a dollar and none of them stop to pick it up. A dollar buys nothing in Miami, not even the cheapest juice drink from the most discounted store. But at the same time, a dollar isn’t worth much in any other part of the country. But why does nobody pick it up? Embarrassment? Fear? Wealth? What stands out the most to me is the tree in the photograph. From trees come money, but trees are not admired as much as money. In this photo, a group of people walked past a dollar, probably admiring how the tree looked so beautiful in this after rain dew. The tree is vibrantly green, while the dollar is dull and degraded. The dollar, probably traveled around Miami for quite some time, who knows who could have held that dollar, or more importantly, or disgustingly, what had held that dollar. It was probably spent on cocaine, cigarettes, or drugs. It could have been given to a homeless person, who quickly used it with a handful of other dollars to buy a beer. In Miami, everyone wants to seem rich. Rich people are seen with women, expensive toys, luxury, and a smile. Who wants to be seen picking up a stray dollar? "As if I dont have twelve thousand more of those in my bank account," everybody tries to tell themselves. 

3 comments:

  1. I like your comparison with the money and the tree, you related two aspects in the photo that do not seem similar to the average viewer of the photo. In addition, I like how you related to the culture in Miami. Maybe add a little more on how it makes you feel.

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  2. I think that you need to add in more emotion into your analysis of the photo, and let the reader see how this photo personally relates to you. You did a good job at establishing the studium of the photograph and I really like how you used rhetorical questions to interact with the reader more. I would also like to know what really caught your attention in the photo and caused you to choose this photo over any other one.

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  3. I think your beginning sentence is worded a little weirdly and it could be fixed. Your ideas are good but it would be more effective if, like Alex said, you added more emotion into it. If you made it personal, it would be easier to connect with your audience.

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