Where
are you going?
Smoke,
sweat, and hidden food tucked snuggly between the seats are the smells
associated with the inside of Miami’s yellow taxis. Regardless of their rusty
exterior and dingy interior, yellow taxis are necessary for the inexpensive
transportation of Miami’s locals. But on the other hand, tourists looking for
the “Miami” vacation have available to them nicer taxis, large black Lincoln
SUVs, to explore the town and perhaps visit the beach. Experiences are not
limited to the appearance of the taxi, but also include the atmosphere
established by the driver. Through the speech and ability to create
conversation of Cuban taxi drivers, Miami works on microscopic levels to idealize
the experience of visiting Miami for tourists.
“Where
are you going?” is about as far as these two types of drivers will be similar.
When a college student takes a yellow taxi to the grove, the driver does not
ask their intentions for going to the grove. The intentions of the costumer
does not vary drastically from person to person; but at the same time families
traveling to South Beach are all going there for the same reasons. Sitting in a
yellow taxi, it is unlikely the driver will even ask your name, where you are from,
what you do for a living, or even how many pets you own. Statistics show that
the yellow taxi driver is likely from Cuba and, as a result, has poor English.
Even with the refined language of an SUV Cuban taxi driver, would the yellow taxi
driver even care about the customers biography? The service of a ride to the
grove is in no way impeded by silence in the car. The costumer is going to get
there either way.
Yellow
taxis achieve what they are designed to do, transport a local from point A to
point B. But other taxis, with their leather interior, working air conditioner,
and fresh spring smell, provide an experience that tourists coming to Miami
were looking for. Even down to the smallest detail, Miami is becoming more and
more a slave to this image established, not by the locals, but by tourists.
Hey Aidan, again I really like your idea concerning how the two separate taxis represent how tourism controls various industries in Miami. I think you need to focus more on the actual drivers still. Get into their background (what you know and what you can infer) and their appearance and how the basics of what they do to closely compare the two types of drivers.
ReplyDeleteAlso be aware of you verb choices as some sentences are a little confusing or don't make as much sense. Example: "Even with the refined language of an SUV Cuban taxi driver, would the yellow taxi driver even care about the customers biography?" You can just say that "Even if both drivers could speak perfect English, would the yellow taxi driver care about where the customer was born or grew up.